Wait, wait--we're not finished yet! The self proclaimed national logo expert has not spoken.

I love your logo. But if you say "custom awards and engraving" it's a lot stronger. Or "custom engraving and awards".

In the real world our logos don't mean very much--nobody but us cares. But your name is very important and what you're really after is when somebody says where can I find an engraver --the answer should be "call Phoenix."

One more thing and I'm finished. Good logos should be versatile. That is they should work on signs, web sites, invoices, business cards, vans, etc. In my less than humble opinion yours is quite good and all you need to change is what you offer in the way of service.

Chuck:

Great minds??????????????

When I started my business lasers were relatively new on the scene in all areas so when I named my business I did so with the idea of selling the name to somebody with a pocket full of cash and re-naming it later to something more in line with the service I was offering.

Like many of my ideas it just didn't happen. But the name's still for sale if anybody's interested. :S

Hi Becky,
David Takes is a master at this kind of work. You may want to throw some ideas around with him.

Dee

Philadelphia, PA (Really Bensalem)

Dave - not true. 8-O I could not resist picking on you. (devil)

I am Ok if you want to give Becky a hand please feel free to go ahead. ;-)

Very nice logo, but it doesn't say engraving. To look at the design, I would first think Arizona (as previously mentioned) and then I would think that it was a graphics place for vehicle detailing or something along those lines.
Maybe gear your design more toward the bird aspect. Or maybe, since you obviously put alot of work into the logo, instead of scrapping it, you might take it and engrave it like on a piece of wood or something as see how that looks and then create your logo from that. That way, you are using the logo that you created, but it has a definate engraving look to it.
Sorry I am not much in the help department. Its late and I have a pregnant wife wanting oreos. If I think of anything else, I will let you know.
As far as the design though, its very nice.

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